In Term 1 we were learning to write a naritive. My one was called Peter Hunter. Here it is.
One day 3 friends called Peter,Jack and Diamond were having fun on the beach with their pets. Peterś one was a dragon,Jackś one is a squidosaurusrex and Diamondś one is a chinchillasaurus.They were swimming around when BOOM!!What was that yelled Diamond.They all ran as fast they could.They ran to the village.They started to cry!The town was runined!Then the heard a werid laugh.¨MAHAAHAHAHA.¨Then they saw someone on a speed boat!They got on there pets and went off to get the mad man.They follow him to a city and lost were he was.That all for now.Thanks for reading :)
I like that you had a good start and the end to.
ReplyDeleteRyan i really like the way you set out your story and i hope there´s more and your avatar looks SOOO much like you.
ReplyDeleteWOW Ryan i love your story
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